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Abbreviations You Should Purge

— LRicci at 1:19 pm on Sunday, May 21, 2006

photo from MorgueFile.comEveryone knows they should avoid acronyms and abbreviations in proposals.

This is a good idea because it increases the reader’s comprehension of your proposal. When the reader must stop to look up an acronym, or hesitates to digest an abbreviation, comprehension is reduced. The reader should be able to cruise though your prose at a comfortable speed without too many bumps caused by unfamiliar references.

Today I read a good discussion on another list about the use of Latin abbreviations. Among these are the familiar etc., e.g. and i.e.

I hadn’t thought about it, but the case was made that latin abbreviations are a barrier to non-native english readers. Since many of our documents are used globally, this is another area we can improve our writing.

I hate to give up my favorite, n.b., but I guess I can use my attention getting ACTION NEEDED: instead.

  • For etc., use ‘and so forth’
  • For i.e., use ’such as,’ or ‘in other words’
  • For e.g., use ‘for example’

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Comment by Mike Starr

May 23, 2006 @ 9:22 am

I can grudgingly give up e.g. and i.e. and I never embraced n.b. in the first place, but I can’t see the point of giving up etc. It’s too ingrained in our language… it may be technically Latin but we’ve carjacked it into the language. You’ll have to pry etc. from my cold dead hands.

“The problem with defending the purity of the English language is that English is about as pure as a cribhouse whore. We don’t just borrow words; on occasion, English has pursued other languages down alleyways to beat them unconscious and rifle their pockets for new vocabulary.” — James Davis Nicoll

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Comment by Clint Laskowski

May 23, 2006 @ 3:16 pm

n.b.?

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Comment by LRicci

May 23, 2006 @ 4:15 pm

Ah. An opportunity to enlighten…
N.B. from the latin, Note Bene, meaning “Note Well,” in the command tense. Similar to “Pay Attention to This” in American english.

As for English stealing words, many languages do. Do you know how to say “tractor” in Latin America? It’s “john deere.”

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Comment by Chris Cole

June 5, 2006 @ 10:30 am

I guess in general I agree with avoiding abbreviations, however etc is a case of an abbreviation that is portable accross several languages (Spanish, Portugese, French). My guess is that it more ingrained than we think.

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